Post by Nix on Mar 16, 2012 23:06:58 GMT -5
GENERAL
Name: Nix Glacier
www.babyhold.com/
Actual Age: 18
Appeared Age 18
Human
Gender: Male
Occupation: Chef
Birthplace: Doesn't remember.
Current Location: Doesn't remember.
Family Relations: They are dead.
Weapon: He uses magic. He used ice and snow magic. The magic has been in his blood his whole life and depends on his will how he can use it. He can created snow storms. He can created ice weapon, armor, walls, clones, and other little things.
Other Items Owned: Nix always wear golden ice necklace that give him a little power boost.
BACKGROUND
Level: If you have read the race description, you will know what this means. You can either copy-paste the description given into this section or elaborate in your own words.
Personality: Nix is shy young man and really smart. He doesn't like to show how smart he is because rather not to be notice by people. He always believed that other people live means way more then his and will always jump in front to save someone. He tends to try to hide in the shadow but kinda sucks at it.
When he met someone he like, he try to hard. He very nice guy and try to help people in any way he can because really hate when he see people in pain. When he give advice he will throw it right down the middle and let other people decided what they want to do. He free spirit guy.
Fears: There should be at least 3 things in this section. Please try to make these things original to your character. List phobias or unique fears. Listing things such as ‘death’ will not be accepted considering that most people do not exactly look forward to death. You can elaborate on your fear – it doesn’t need to be limited to one or two words. If you do so, please note them in bullet points or dashes for easier reading.
Strengths: There should be at least 3 things in this sections. ‘Being a lycan’ or ‘being a vampire’ will not be accepted as a strength. It is a given thing and far too vague. These sections are for you to elaborate on the finer points of your character. Listing any special training is a good start, just be sure to mention it in your history as well. You can elaborate on your strengths as much as you want, just be sure to designate them with bullet points or slashes for easier reading.
Weaknesses: There should be at least 3 things in this section. Listing things such as ‘silver’ will not be accepted as one of the three. If you are a lycan or vampire that is an understood and given thing. List any allergies your character may have as well as inability to do things. Try to be original, as always, and designate any long descriptions with bullet points or slashes for easy reading.
Likes: There should be at least 3 things in this section. If you are a vampire, listing ‘blood’ as a like will not be accepted. List any music types, hobbies, etc. If going into detail with your likes, please designate them with bullet points or slashes for easier reading.
Dislikes: There should be at least 3 things in this section. Listing things like ‘sunlight’ (if you are a vampire) or ‘silver’ (if you are a lycan) will not be accepted as one of the three. Be original and list things like pet peeves and such. If going into detail with your dislikes, please separate them with bullet points or slashes to make it easier to read.
Detailed History: The world ‘detailed’ is in there for a reason. Please make this at least 3 long paragraphs. The first paragraph typically covers your character’s childhood. Try to be original – most people’s parents don’t die/get killed so much in the real world. Attempt to make your character as original as you can. Your bio is the best way to do that. Your childhood will have a great impact on your character’s life. If your parents died, you wouldn’t be a happy-go-lucky person. The death of your parents would leave a great emotional scar on you. Be realistic here, please. Describe any siblings, important childhood events, and anything else that will flesh your character out. Don’t stick random sentences in your history just to fill up space.
If you are a vampire or lycan, please spend at least a paragraph describing your turning. Read over the ‘lycan description’ and ‘vampire description’ to get an idea of how this happens. I wrote up the descriptions myself, so I will know if you haven’t read them properly. Make sure to cover all your bases – describe what happened to the one who turned you (if they aren’t a part of your life or an existing character). Also keep in mind that vampires and lycans both have no control when they first start out.
Describe at the end your life now. Where you live, what you do, etc. The history, more than any other section of the application, is the best place to put detail. If you are going to be a part of a pack or be joining someone (i.e. best friend, family member) be sure the person in question knows you are saying that in your bio. Although you may think from reading their bio and stuff that you know them, people can get very possessive about their characters. Don’t ever assume something without knowing firsthand from the person in question. If you have an existing character mentioned a lot in your history and the rest of your application, I will make sure to check with the person playing the character to make sure you have contacted them.
APPEARANCE
Facial Appearance: This would be an ideal place to put a picture of some kind. CC’s (character claims) are not required, but be aware that if you don’t have a picture I’ll expect this section to be a lot longer. Describe hair – color, length, style, thick or wavy, etc. Include eye color and skin color as well. This would be a good place to mention unique things like freckles or certain expressions your character often has. Does your character walk around with a constant smirk on their face? Make sure to mention this.
Clothing: Even if you have a picture, be sure to detail what clothing your character usually wears. Are they dressier or do they prefer jeans and t-shirts? These would be good things to mention here.
Build: If you have a picture with a full body shot, this section can be shorter. If you don’t I’ll expect a fair amount of detail here. Describe your character’s height. Describe the way they are built – are they willowy or stout? Muscular or pudgy? Does your character have very long legs? Mention this.
Wolf Form: (LYCANS) Here, if you are a lycan, you should describe your wolf form. Remember, there are two forms you can take: regular wolf form and two legged form. Describe height in two legged form as well as build. Please include fur color, eye color, and any interesting marks. Remember: you will inherit the color of the wolf who bit you, either streaks of the color or the full coat. You can put a picture of your wolf here as well.
Marks/Scars: Mention any tattoos, scars, marks, etc. You don’t need to mention every mole on your body – just the important ones that add to your character.
(Thank you to ItheLynx at RPG-D for the tips!)
Read more: wotardissension.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=characterdev&action=display&thread=4#ixzz1pLHaJV3q
Name: Nix Glacier
www.babyhold.com/
Actual Age: 18
Appeared Age 18
Human
Gender: Male
Occupation: Chef
Birthplace: Doesn't remember.
Current Location: Doesn't remember.
Family Relations: They are dead.
Weapon: He uses magic. He used ice and snow magic. The magic has been in his blood his whole life and depends on his will how he can use it. He can created snow storms. He can created ice weapon, armor, walls, clones, and other little things.
Other Items Owned: Nix always wear golden ice necklace that give him a little power boost.
BACKGROUND
Level: If you have read the race description, you will know what this means. You can either copy-paste the description given into this section or elaborate in your own words.
Personality: Nix is shy young man and really smart. He doesn't like to show how smart he is because rather not to be notice by people. He always believed that other people live means way more then his and will always jump in front to save someone. He tends to try to hide in the shadow but kinda sucks at it.
When he met someone he like, he try to hard. He very nice guy and try to help people in any way he can because really hate when he see people in pain. When he give advice he will throw it right down the middle and let other people decided what they want to do. He free spirit guy.
Fears: There should be at least 3 things in this section. Please try to make these things original to your character. List phobias or unique fears. Listing things such as ‘death’ will not be accepted considering that most people do not exactly look forward to death. You can elaborate on your fear – it doesn’t need to be limited to one or two words. If you do so, please note them in bullet points or dashes for easier reading.
Strengths: There should be at least 3 things in this sections. ‘Being a lycan’ or ‘being a vampire’ will not be accepted as a strength. It is a given thing and far too vague. These sections are for you to elaborate on the finer points of your character. Listing any special training is a good start, just be sure to mention it in your history as well. You can elaborate on your strengths as much as you want, just be sure to designate them with bullet points or slashes for easier reading.
Weaknesses: There should be at least 3 things in this section. Listing things such as ‘silver’ will not be accepted as one of the three. If you are a lycan or vampire that is an understood and given thing. List any allergies your character may have as well as inability to do things. Try to be original, as always, and designate any long descriptions with bullet points or slashes for easy reading.
Likes: There should be at least 3 things in this section. If you are a vampire, listing ‘blood’ as a like will not be accepted. List any music types, hobbies, etc. If going into detail with your likes, please designate them with bullet points or slashes for easier reading.
Dislikes: There should be at least 3 things in this section. Listing things like ‘sunlight’ (if you are a vampire) or ‘silver’ (if you are a lycan) will not be accepted as one of the three. Be original and list things like pet peeves and such. If going into detail with your dislikes, please separate them with bullet points or slashes to make it easier to read.
Detailed History: The world ‘detailed’ is in there for a reason. Please make this at least 3 long paragraphs. The first paragraph typically covers your character’s childhood. Try to be original – most people’s parents don’t die/get killed so much in the real world. Attempt to make your character as original as you can. Your bio is the best way to do that. Your childhood will have a great impact on your character’s life. If your parents died, you wouldn’t be a happy-go-lucky person. The death of your parents would leave a great emotional scar on you. Be realistic here, please. Describe any siblings, important childhood events, and anything else that will flesh your character out. Don’t stick random sentences in your history just to fill up space.
If you are a vampire or lycan, please spend at least a paragraph describing your turning. Read over the ‘lycan description’ and ‘vampire description’ to get an idea of how this happens. I wrote up the descriptions myself, so I will know if you haven’t read them properly. Make sure to cover all your bases – describe what happened to the one who turned you (if they aren’t a part of your life or an existing character). Also keep in mind that vampires and lycans both have no control when they first start out.
Describe at the end your life now. Where you live, what you do, etc. The history, more than any other section of the application, is the best place to put detail. If you are going to be a part of a pack or be joining someone (i.e. best friend, family member) be sure the person in question knows you are saying that in your bio. Although you may think from reading their bio and stuff that you know them, people can get very possessive about their characters. Don’t ever assume something without knowing firsthand from the person in question. If you have an existing character mentioned a lot in your history and the rest of your application, I will make sure to check with the person playing the character to make sure you have contacted them.
APPEARANCE
Facial Appearance: This would be an ideal place to put a picture of some kind. CC’s (character claims) are not required, but be aware that if you don’t have a picture I’ll expect this section to be a lot longer. Describe hair – color, length, style, thick or wavy, etc. Include eye color and skin color as well. This would be a good place to mention unique things like freckles or certain expressions your character often has. Does your character walk around with a constant smirk on their face? Make sure to mention this.
Clothing: Even if you have a picture, be sure to detail what clothing your character usually wears. Are they dressier or do they prefer jeans and t-shirts? These would be good things to mention here.
Build: If you have a picture with a full body shot, this section can be shorter. If you don’t I’ll expect a fair amount of detail here. Describe your character’s height. Describe the way they are built – are they willowy or stout? Muscular or pudgy? Does your character have very long legs? Mention this.
Wolf Form: (LYCANS) Here, if you are a lycan, you should describe your wolf form. Remember, there are two forms you can take: regular wolf form and two legged form. Describe height in two legged form as well as build. Please include fur color, eye color, and any interesting marks. Remember: you will inherit the color of the wolf who bit you, either streaks of the color or the full coat. You can put a picture of your wolf here as well.
Marks/Scars: Mention any tattoos, scars, marks, etc. You don’t need to mention every mole on your body – just the important ones that add to your character.
(Thank you to ItheLynx at RPG-D for the tips!)
Read more: wotardissension.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=characterdev&action=display&thread=4#ixzz1pLHaJV3q